Attached is the dissertation you need to edit as per the comments: Strengths against the marking criteria:The content evidences a generally good understanding of the issues, the challenges pertaining to the Nigerian downstream transportation network system and related disciplines (health and safety, etc.). The context and explanations of key concepts related to the area under investigation were adequate. You also managed to produce a set of objectives that while not being sufficiently focused, still provided the needed guidance for carrying out your investigation. You also made a good attempt throughout the main body to connect the various sections with the stated 3 research objectives. Overall comments:Your Capstone Project report was a great disappointment. The concept was sound, and your discussion started well with a succinct introduction and good background and contextualisation. However, as soon as you abandoned the advice to achieve a sharp focus with a single Research Question and replaced this with a couple of hypotheses and no obvious Research Objectives, the final output was always likely to struggle to present a well-formed piece of research. The material was unevenly structured and could have usefully used a thorough proof reading to collate the text into specific discussion areas. There was a sense of emerging argument, but the later Chapters were seemingly answering a general debate on barriers to renewable energy in general, rather than concentrating solely on the UAE and the optimisation of integrating renewable energy into the electricity grid. There was a weak application of numerical and statistical methods, with the reader asked to accept the analysis without any evidence of the “raw” data obtained from your researches and questionnaires.
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